positive comments luis and lizzy said "your rising action was very suspensfull". zack and sam said " we especially enjoyed the shot where damarius turns around and waves at damon". alicia and jorge said "we liked it alot when damon is daydreaming looking in damarius'direction. it was very cute". michael and cody said "we liked when jessica messed up her lines. it was funny". cassie and alexis said "the camera shot of jessica in the beggining has alot of potential". mario and laura said " we liked your shoulder shots because it really made the conversation more interesting". suggestions luis and lizzy said " add music to video for a greater effect". zack and sam said "youcould have more interaction between damarius and damon". alicia and jorge said "you should add close ups to make the video more dramatic in some parts".cody and michael said " you should use more dialogue".